Jane Smallwood
Apr 19, 2022

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Wow. Really incredible piece. I rode along with you, jaw clenched, as the tide came rolling in. Your language is so evocative; I was on edge until those "bodies" became real, those memories, then on to the other side of those "old iron gates"—to the "softest green grass." Amazing transformation.

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Jane Smallwood

Passionate about poetry; mine is a work in progress. I’m an editor who reads a lot, but when I read in my free time, I don’t change a word. Love to paddleboard!