The beauty of a your daughter becoming is captured in such a lovely way here. Almost like how a cloud forms, how creation happens. And the "tentatively/overcoming/surface tension,/gathering like-/minded droplets/to herself. The breaking free, the connection with the other droplets. Wonderful. (I too have a daughter and thrill at every single step she takes toward independence, her breaking free from the forces of inertia.) So well done, SD.